TOC of the October issue of Advanced Aquarist

[AF Founder]

We are experimenting with a new TOC design. If you are having trouble reading it, or simply don't like the way it looks, please let us know. We already know that we present the best material, and now we would like to look pleasing too.

 

[Anonymous]

Bonjour Terry,

very confusing design and layout, imho.
the only thing my eyes catched up with are the adds like the Marine Depot one.
the background color and the text color are not "marine related", not representative of we are dealing with.
if i were into Bonsai trees then they would be perfect :roll:

get a more eye catching design, something more visual, less sober. i do like the way this fish is outlined but it is not "flashy", "meaty", it is odor and tasteless, imho once again.

i hope i am not being to negative, anyway you asked for it :wink:

still like very much the content,

Toine

 

[AF Founder]

Bonjour Terry,

very confusing design and layout, imho.
the only thing my eyes catched up with are the adds like the Marine Depot one.
the background color and the text color are not "marine related", not representative of we are dealing with.
if i were into Bonsai trees then they would be perfect :roll:

get a more eye catching design, something more visual, less sober. i do like the way this fish is outlined but it is not "flashy", "meaty", it is odor and tasteless, imho once again.

i hope i am not being to negative, anyway you asked for it :wink:

still like very much the content,

Toine

Thanks for the feedback. It should help us.